This is me (Martin Connor) rapping, and I made the beat too:
You can download it here: soundcloud
Martin Connor is a music teacher & writer from Philadelphia, PA, with a music degree of high distinction from Duke University who is currently studying for a master’s degree at Brandeis University in Boston, MA, while focusing his research on the vocal melodies of the rap genre. He has contributed freelance articles to HipHopDX, Complex, and Pigeons and Planes, and had multiple articles from his website, www.RapAnalysis.com go viral on BET, The Source, XXL, and MTV. He teaches rap lessons online through the music school LessonFace, and has a book, The Artistry Of Rap Music, forthcoming from the McFarland Publishing House, scheduled for release in late 2017, as a follow-up to his 2014 contribution to their anthology "Eminem & Rap, Poetry, Race." He welcomes all comments, compliments, insults, and restaurant suggestions at [email protected]
fuck off anonymous shamefully advertising. The lyrics are dope, as is the beat. Give this to a professional rapper and I think it'd be pretty dope
Thanks man! Haha I'm glad at least one person likes it. The rap could use some work, the delivery I mean, but the beats are where I'm strongest right now I think.
Anyway, thanks for listening
Hey i am a fan of your movement. I am a fan of your work as well. I just recently started putting my lyrics onto beats and i am having a tuff time. Glad to see people still helping primarily for the love of music.
No doubt dude! Thanks for the love! Spread it around!
The delivery is horrid; you fluctuate very often and it doesn't sound good. The lyrics are too forced; it sounds like you have a rhyme program, researched one word, and squeezed in every word that rhymes with it in existence into the rap. Sorry man, not feeling it. Lost interest as well. The beat is very boring too.
You tried which is more than most…props!